11th composition

Please let me know about my question. ^^ When I am studying with you, I can't hear your saying some of parts clearly. Frist of all, My english skill is not good. And there is a little bit noisy around you. So, If possible, I want to be talking to you at the good condition. But, It's not easy to do that. I'm OK. I'll try to improve my english skill as soon as possible. ^^ I always thank your teaching. After being taught from you, I have interest in studying english again. To be honest with you, I lost my will to study english before I met you.

Hello there!!!^^ Thank you for sending your composition. I'm not sure as to why you can't hear me sometimes.I'll try to find out too and then I'll tell you,okay? I'm so happy to have you in my class. Anyway, here are the corrections, please check them out. Take care!^^ Please let me know about my question. ^^ >>Please let me know the answer regarding my question.When I am studying with you, I can't hear your saying some of parts clearly. >>When I'm studying with you, I can't hear you clearly.Frist of all, My english skill is not good. >>First of all, my English skills are not good. And there is a little bit noisy around you. >>And you have a noisy background.So, If possible, I want to be talking to you at the good condition. >>So, if it is possible, I want to have classes with you in a good phone condition.But, It's not easy to do that. >>But, it's not easy to do that. I'm OK. >>CORRECT! >>I'm alright. I'll try to improve my english skill as soon as possible. ^^ >>CORRECT!I always thank your teaching. >>I'm always thankful for your teachings.After being taught from you, I have interest in studying english again. >>After having classes with you, I've been interested to study English again.To be honest with you, I lost my will to study english before I met you. >>CORRECT!