11th Homework

2016-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Oh, the themes of the essay homework is always complex to write down things that are likely a black and white to me. Anyway, I will choose a practical thing so that it can use right now. But I think if the practical thing must have the root of the decision, it is better. As we live, we won't ignore a idealistic thing that intends to be good. There are many cases that the ideal is generally the ultimate truth. A idealistic is also needed to set up a plan. Bur in the real life the idealistic thing is always not a good selection because it may collide with. The ideal is good but in the real is not good if many people don't want it and don't accept it. Finally, it will be caused troubles. Oftenly, we have to compromise with others. In the real life there is no ideal. The ideal is just ideal. However, the important point of ideal points a place to pursue. If we have not the place, we may wonder. I think the idealistic thing is the final line and the pratical thing is to get there.

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    Hello, [이름]! (^^,)v A freezing but beautiful Monday to you. Thank you very much for this wonderful composition. Being practical and being idealistic are both equally important. Sometimes you have to know when you should be practical and when you should be idealistic. As some people would say, it will always depend on the situation at hand. When you are setting a goal for yourself, you should be idealistic but realistic at the same time. While you are in the course of achieving your goals, you have to consider a lot of things such as time and resources. That\'s when being practical comes in. I totally agree with you when you said being idealistic is necessary when you are setting a goal but being practical would most likely get you there Being able to balance both is difficult but rewarding. I hope I was able to shed you some light regarding this matter. Have a wonderful day [이름]. See you again tomorrow. Godspeed! ~Teacher C[이름] (^^,) Oh, the themes of the essay homework is always complex to write down things that are likely a black and white to me. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Oh, the themes of the essay homework are always complex and they always seem black and white to me. Anyway, I will choose a practical thing so that it can use right now. >> Anyway, I will choose being practical right now. But I think if the practical thing must have the root of the decision, it is better. >> I think choosing to be practical when making a decision is better. As we live, we won\'t ignore a idealistic thing that intends to be good. >> As we live, we should not ignore being idealistic because it makes us a good person. There are many cases that the ideal is generally the ultimate truth. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: There are many cases where being ideal leads us to the ultimate truth A idealistic is also needed to set up a plan. >> Being idealistic is also needed in setting up a plan. Bur in the real life the idealistic thing is always not a good selection because it may collide with. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But in the real life, being idealistic is always not a good thing because it may collide with other things. The ideal is good but in the real is not good if many people don\'t want it and don\'t accept it. >> Being ideal is good but it won\'t be useful if many people don\'t want it and don\'t accept it. Finally, it will be caused troubles. >> Finally, it will cause troubles. Oftenly, we have to compromise with others. >> We have to compromise with others often. In the real life there is no ideal. >> In the real life there is no such thing as ideal. The ideal is just ideal. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Being ideal is just a concept. However, the important point of ideal points a place to pursue. >> However, the important point of being ideal is. it shows us the things we have to pursue. If we have not the place, we may wonder. >> If we don\'t have a destination, we may wander. I think the idealistic thing is the final line and the pratical thing is to get there. >> I think being idealistic is the goal while being practical is the means to get to that goal.

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