11th July
학생이 쓴 원문
This morning I got the question from the teacher, "What would you need if you were alone in a desert island?"
I answered like this, "To be honest with you, I want to bring the most beautiful woman there not my wife."
I am really wondering what is yours answer about the question.
How many percent people say "my wife"?
If someone answer like this, he is a really happy person.
Anyway I have a lot of things to talk to my children when they choose their spouses. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Oh! I'm sorry I thought you said that you would want to bring your wife with you in an island. Haha! Well, for people who are married they don't choose to be with their wife or husband. They would always think of a celebrity to go to an island with. So, I would say that it is natural to think of other people to bring in an island. It is also nice to think about fantasy once in a while to help you.
T.Faye
Here are some of your corrections:
This morning I got the question from the teacher, "What would you need if you were alone in a desert island?"
>>You asked me, "What would you need if you were alone in a desert island?"I answered like this, "To be honest with you, I want to bring the most beautiful woman there not my wife."
>>I answered, To be honest with you, I want to bring a beautiful woman in the island and not my wife.
I am really wondering what is yours answer about the question.
>>I am really wondering what your answer is to the question.How many percent people say "my wife"?
>>How many people say my wife?If someone answer like this, he is a really happy person.
>>If someone answered like this, he must be really happy.Anyway I have a lot of things to talk to my children when they choose their spouses. ^^
>>Anyway I have a lot of things to tell my children about how to choose their future spouses.^^
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