12.03 homework
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In your personal opinion, is it timely for North and South Korean countries to launch their satellites or rockets at this time? why or why not?
I don't know the details about politic circumstance between North and South Korea.
However there are some political events in South Korea and now, the parties are
debating for their power.
And actually South Korean nations don't focus on that issue because of president election and a lot of year-end-works.
So, I doubt that It is proper period to launch rockets and I hope that it will be start next year after all works are assigned to next political government and they maintain stable.
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Hello tehre Julia!
Thanks for doing your homework eventhough I know that you\'re very sick too just like me..kkk
Anyway, you\'ve got maturity in answering questions. Great!
Please check the corrections I made for you and ask me in class if you have questions in mind about this. ^^
See you in class! Have a nice day and get well soon! ^^
T.Kristel
In your personal opinion, is it timely for North and South Korean countries to launch their satellites or rockets at this time? why or why not? I don\'t know the details about politic circumstance between North and South Korea.
>>I don\'t know much details about the political circumstance between North and South Korea.However there are some political events in South Korea and now, the parties aredebating for their power.
>>CORRECT!!And actually South Korean nations don\'t focus on that issue because of president election and a lot of year-end-works.
>>And actually South Koreans don\'t focus on that issue because of the upcoming presidential elections and a lot of year-end-works.So, I doubt that It is proper period to launch rockets and I hope that it will be start next year after all works are assigned to next political government and they maintain stable.
>>So I doubt that it is the proper period to launch rockets. I think it is best if they\'ll do that at the beginning of next year when all works are assigned to the next political government and when they have already maintained stability.
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