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>> You are going to move out to another place. Call a real estate agent and tell him or her the type of house you want to live in.
Hi, this is [이름]. I \'m calling to inquire a house located in the downtown area posted from website. I want to see this apartment as soon as possible because i think this apartment is suitable to live for us. I was looking for a new house where is near the university and accessible to traffic. I will be sharing the place with my roommate. When i stop by your office? I hope i want to meet today.
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Hi [이름]^^
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Jean
>> You are going to move out to another place. Call a real estate agent and tell him or her the type of house you want to live in.
Hi, this is [이름]. I \'m calling to inquire a house located in the downtown area posted from website.
>> Hi! This is [이름]. I\'m calling to inquire whether you know of the house located in the downtown area that\'s posted on the website.
I want to see this apartment as soon as possible because i think this apartment is suitable to live for us.
>> I want to see this apartment as soon as possible because I think it is suitable for us.
I was looking for a new house where is near the university and accessible to traffic.
>> I was looking for a new house, which is near the university and accessible to bus stops, the subway, and shops.
I will be sharing the place with my roommate.
>> correct
When i stop by your office? I hope i want to meet today.
>> May I know when I can drop by your office?
I hope i want to meet today.
>> I hope I can meet you today.
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