12/04
학생이 쓴 원문
1.When will you mail that letter? c. After school.
2.What are you going to do after dinner? b. I'll take a bath.
3.How long have you been playing the trumpet? d. By myself.
4.How many hours a day do you sleep? d. I sleep 7 hours.
Good evening! T.winnie!
I heard a terrible news from my co-worker.
It was about the nuclear pollution in Japan.
As you know, Japan was damaged by the tsunami from the west of Japan in 2011.
So the nuclear plant was destroyed by that tsunami and much nuclear water has leaked until now.
This problem is a disaster to all of the world not to Japanese only.
How do you think of this problem??
It affected our life and it will affect in the future continuouly.
That's why our family don't have any fish from Japan or the sea near Japan.
Forethermore, my country is rejecting some food from Japan. This policy is a good action for our nation. Haha.
See you!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s really sad to know about the news.I think this problem should not happen again.Well, we just hope that every thing will become better as time goes by.
Below are the corrections.......;)
T. Winnie
1.When will you mail that letter? c. After school.
>>CORRECT2.What are you going to do after dinner? b. I\'ll take a bath.
>>CORRECT3.How long have you been playing the trumpet? d. By myself.
>>B. For four years.4.How many hours a day do you sleep? d. I sleep 7 hours.>>CORRECTI heard a terrible news from my co-worker.
>>CORRECTIt was about the nuclear pollution in Japan.
>>CORRECTAs you know, Japan was damaged by the tsunami from the west of Japan in 2011.
>>As you know,the west side of Japan was damaged by the tsunami in 2011.So the nuclear plant was destroyed by that tsunami and much nuclear water has leaked until now.
>>CORRECTThis problem is a disaster to all of the world not to Japanese only.
>>This problem is a disaster,not only to Japan but all over the world.How do you think of this problem??
>>What do you think about this problem?It affected our life and it will affect in the future continuouly.
>>It affects our lives and will continue to affect it in the future.That\'s why our family don\'t have any fish from Japan or the sea near Japan.
>>That\'s why our family don\'t buy fish from Japan or sea near Japan.Forethermore, my country is rejecting some food from Japan.
>>Further more,my country is rejecting some food from Japan.
This policy is a good action for our nation. Haha.
>>CORRECTSee you!
>>CORRECT
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