12/04
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Creating a sentence is a challenge that we need to face and learn.
I encourage you to assess yourself and set up your goals. These goals are ownerships or your learnings. So start setting up your goals in life, especially in setting up your goals in learning English. These are your treasures.^^
T.Winnie^^
Good morining, T.Winnie.
>>Good morning, T. Winne.
It is a sunny day!!
>>correct
Please check my homeworks as below.
>>Please check my homework below.^^
1. I will go to my wife\'s house tomorrow.
>>correct
2. I stop by the supermarket near my house every weekend to buy something for my baby.
>>correct
3. As you know, it is important to how to make your summary when you report your
evaluation about your business trip.
>>It is important to know how to make an evaluation summary about your business trip.
4. How do you find or select a proper cafeteria for your dinner? ^^
>>
How do you look for or select the proper cafeteria for you to eat dinner?
5. How about my pronunciation?
>>correct
I have some question of my pronunciation for example
notes, profits and so on.
>>I have a question about my pronunciation with the words like notes, profit and so on.
>>
I don\'t have any news about what made me happy, but I want to start my job with a smile.
As I mentioned, please be happy and be positive always.
>>Correct^^
As you know, my trip for the vessel will be 3days from Sunday to Tuesday.
>>As you know, my vessel trip will be for 3 days from Sunday to Tuesday.
So I will answer your call on the vessel on Monday.
>>correct^^
I just thought of my promise with my friend who is my friend from the University.
>>I just thought about my promise to my friend, who is my friend from the university.
I will have a dinner with this friend as well as other friends.
>>I will have dinner with her together with our other friends.
I\'m not sure when the dinner will be finished.. continue...
>>I\'m not sure what time our dinner will be finished. [to be continued^^]
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