12/05
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for sending me your composition^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
If you have any questions, just feel free to ask me in our class^^
See you later^^
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Winnie^^
Good day~!!
>>correct^^
Please check my homework and revise any wrong sentence.
>>correct^^
1. fantastic : Do you have any fantastic plan for this chistmas day?
>> Do you have any fantastic plans for Christmas?
I hope to have a fantastic weekend with our family. But I\'m not sure because of my working schedule.
>>I hope I would have a fantastic weekend with my family but I\'m not sure because of my working schedule.
2. safety : You must fasten your seat belt for your safety.
>>correct^^
That is our policy so you should follow always.
>>That is our company policy, so you should always follow it.
>>That is our company policy, so you should always obey the rule.
3. attendance : The tommorrow meeting needs our CEO\'s attendance for reviewing a major decision.
>>Tomorrow\'s meeting needs our CEO\'s attendance for reviewing a major decision.
4. lifted : Ship\'s provision and spare parts were lifted on the expected time.
>>CORRECT^^
But new joiners didn\'t arrive at the designated port.
>>But new comers didn\'t arrive at the designated port.
5. leftover : After having your lunch, don\'t dispose any leftover foods.
>>After having your lunch, don\'t dispose any leftovers.
If not, you will receive a lot of penalty by the government which controls in your area.
>>If not, you will receive a lot of penalties from the government that controls your area.
Thank you for your effort!
>>correct^^
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