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2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Were you taught about AIDS at school? I was taught about STD including AIDS at school several times. Korean sex educations have provided informations of STD with visual materials such as educational documentary about transmission routes, symptoms, how to prevent and so on. I don\'t know how\'s going on these days however, those were not effective when I took sex education classes. It was too academic and lecture-centered so I quickly forgot what I learned.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

>> Were you taught about AIDS at school?

I was taught about STD including AIDS at school several times.

>> I was taught several times at school about STD including AIDS.

Korean sex educations have provided informations of STD with visual materials such as educational documentary about transmission routes, symptoms, how to prevent and so on.

>> The Korean sex education has provided information on STD with visual materials such as educational documentary about transmission routes, symptoms, prevention, and so on.

I don\'t know how\'s going on these days however, those were not effective when I took sex education classes.

>> I\'m not aware of my country\'s status in terms of AIDS however, I can say that the education that we received at school was not effective.

It was too academic and lecture-centered so I quickly forgot what I learned.

>> correct

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