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2012-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~ I just finished two final exams and came home. I was very tired to study with my stomachache and headache. Anyway, the lab result of my blood was showed that the liver level? is very high. It's about 4 times high than the standard level. The doctor said it is because gastroenteritis have an effect on the liver and there are many reasons for that. And plus, I should rest to recover it. But I'm getting better now. :-) I'm happy to say it to you. oh. And yesterday and today it was heavy snowy. So, everywhere became white and beautiful but extremely cold!!!!! Take care your health too. My mother said healthy body is the preasure.

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A fun Friday to you! Thank you so much for giving your time in sharing your health condition with me. I feel great that you are getting better despite of the lab results.^^ Please consider the corrections that I made for you. I hope to see you really soon and enjoy your weekend^^ ---T. Kristel Hi~ >> Hi! I just finished two final exams and came home.>> Correct!I was very tired to study with my stomachache and headache.>> Correct!Anyway, the lab result of my blood was showed that the liver level? is very high.>> Anyway, the lab result of my blood shows that ther is something in my liver that is very high.It\'s about 4 times high than the standard level.>> Correct!The doctor said it is because gastroenteritis have an effect on the liver and there are many reasons for that. >> The doctor said that it is the reason that gastroenteritis  has an effect on the liver and there are many reasons for that kind of condition.And plus, I should rest to recover it. >> I should rest to recover.But I\'m getting better now. :-) >> Correct!  I\'m happy to say it to you. >> I\'m happy to tell this to you.oh. And yesterday and today it was heavy snowy. >> Oh. Yesterday and today was snowing heavily.So, everywhere became white and beautiful but extremely cold!!!!!>> Correct!Take care your health too. >> Take care of your health too.My mother said healthy body is the preasure. >> My mother said that a healthy body gives pleasure. >> OR: My mother said that a healthy body makes a person happy.

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