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2019-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. real estate agent 2. 6-story building 3. close to 4. drop by 5. convenient time 1. The real estate agent told me each and every information about some houses where i feel good. 2. This studio apartment has 6-story building. If you come my home, you have to familiarize yourself with taking time a bit waiting for elevator. 3. We sat under a tree close to us at that time to get out of harm\'s way. It was the worse memory ever. 4. Walking the street, i heard the familiar song in the cosmetic shops. I really get a kick out of this song. I stopped along the way and drop by there for a moment. 5. Please return me a call when you have convenient time. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^

Thank you for sending your homework. 



Cheers!
Jean

1. real estate agent
2. 6-story building
3. close to
4. drop by
5. convenient time

1. The real estate agent told me each and every information about some houses where i feel good.
>> The real estate agent told me each and every information about some houses that I like. 

2. This studio apartment has 6-story building. If you come my home, you have to familiarize yourself with taking time a bit waiting for elevator.
>> This studio apartment has a 6-story building. If you come to my home, you have to get used to waiting for the elevator. 

3. We sat under a tree close to us at that time to get out of harm\'s way. It was the worse memory ever.
>> We sat under a tree close to us at that time to get out of harm\'s way. It was the worst memory ever.

4. Walking the street, i heard the familiar song in the cosmetic shops. I really get a kick out of this song. I stopped along the way and drop by there for a moment.
>> Walking on the street, I heard the familiar song in the cosmetic shops. I really get a kick out of this song. I stopped along the way and dropped by one of the shops for a moment.

5. Please return me a call when you have convenient time. Thank you.
>> Please call me back when it\'s convenient. Thank you. 

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