12/06
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for doing you\'re homework and for expressing your thoughts.
Very good! You are developing your abilities.
I was actually surprised and confused when I glanced at your composition.
Anyway, let\'s talk more about it in our class.
Please go over the corrections.
See you!^^
~T. Winnie~
TGIF. T.Winne
>> Correct!
Please check my sentences below.
>> Correct!
1. Nowadays I buy something on the internet due to a convenience.
>>
Nowadays, I buy something through the internet due to its convenience.
2. There will be a meeting for managers
>> Correct!
3. This area should be protected on fire.
>>
This area should be protected from fire.
4. The training course is different from the employee\'s career.
>> Correct!
5. Any document couldn\'t see in our office.
>> I couldn\'t see any document/s in our office.
What happen?
>> Correct!
Good morning!
>> Correct!
I have a suggestion for you.
>> Correct!
What if I go to visit your house?? ^^
>>
What if I visit your house?
Plese don\'t be surprised.
>> Please don\'t be surprised.^^
Because the sentence above is a practice to develop my ability.
>>
Because the sentence above is just for me to practice and develop my ability.
I was studied about \'what if\' yesterday.
>>
I studied about \'what if\' yesterday.
Do you know how \'what if\' and \'how about\' are different each other?
>>
Do you know how \'what if\' and \'how about\' are different with each other?
I think these mean same thing.
>>
I think they mean the same.
OR>> I think the meaning is the same.
There are a lot of fine dust in the air in my country now.
>> Correct!
That\'s why I really wanted to wear a mask on my mouse.
>>
That\'s why I really wanted to wear a mask.
However, I counldn\'t look for my mask unfortunately.
>>
However,
unfortunately, I couldn\'t find my mask.
Do you have any plan for your weekend?
>> Do you have any plans for your weekend?
As you know, I don\'t have enough time with my family during the weekend.
>> Correct!
So I should use my time effectively.
>> Correct!
See you in the train!
>> See you on the train!^^
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