12/06

2013-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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TGIF. T.Winne Please check my sentences below. 1. Nowadays I buy something on the internet due to a convenience. 2. There will be a meeting for managers 3. This area should be protected on fire. 4. The training course is different from the employee's career. 5. Any document couldn't see in our office. What happen? Good morning! I have a suggestion for you. What if I go to visit your house?? ^^ Plese don't be surprised. Because the sentence above is a practice to develop my ability. I was studied about 'what if' yesterday. Do you know how 'what if' and 'how about' are different each other? I think these mean same thing. There are a lot of fine dust in the air in my country now. That's why I really wanted to wear a mask on my mouse. However, I counldn't look for my mask unfortunately. Do you have any plan for your weekend? As you know, I don't have enough time with my family during the weekend. So I should use my time effectively. See you in the train!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thanks for doing you\'re homework and for expressing your thoughts.

Very good! You are developing your abilities. 

I was actually surprised and confused when I glanced at your composition.

Anyway, let\'s talk more about it in our class.

Please go over the corrections.

See you!^^

~T. Winnie~

TGIF. T.Winne

>> Correct!

Please check my sentences below.

>> Correct!

1. Nowadays I buy something on the internet due to a convenience.

>>  Nowadays, I buy something through the internet due to its convenience.

2. There will be a meeting for managers

>> Correct!

3. This area should be protected on fire.

>>  This area should be protected from fire.

4. The training course is different from the employee\'s career.

>> Correct!

5. Any document couldn\'t see in our office.

>> I couldn\'t see any document/s in our office.

What happen?

>> Correct!

Good morning!

>> Correct!

I have a suggestion for you.

>> Correct!

What if I go to visit your house?? ^^

>>  What if I visit your house?

Plese don\'t be surprised.

>> Please don\'t be surprised.^^

Because the sentence above is a practice to develop my ability.

>>  Because the sentence above is just for me to practice and develop my ability.

I was studied about \'what if\' yesterday.

>>  I studied about \'what if\' yesterday.

Do you know how \'what if\' and \'how about\' are different each other?

>>  Do you know how \'what if\' and \'how about\' are different with each other?

I think these mean same thing.

>>  I think they mean the same.

OR>> I think the meaning is the same.

There are a lot of fine dust in the air in my country now.

>> Correct!

That\'s why I really wanted to wear a mask on my mouse.

>>  That\'s why I really wanted to wear a mask.

However, I counldn\'t look for my mask unfortunately.

>>  However, unfortunately, I couldn\'t find my mask.

Do you have any plan for your weekend?

>> Do you have any plans for your weekend?

As you know, I don\'t have enough time with my family during the weekend.

>> Correct!

So I should use my time effectively.

>> Correct!

See you in the train!

>> See you on the train!^^


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