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2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> If you could do one job, just for one day to learn what it is like, what would you do? If you could count homeless as a job, my answer is a homeless. I think I can sincerely enjoy it, if it\'s going to be only for one day. Just imagine how wonderful it is. You can lie everywhere, you can yell everyone, you can pee whenever you want and the best part is you can s[이름]p as possible as you can! It will be an one day vacation for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^



Thank you for sending your homework.



Cheers!
Jean 



>> If you could do one job, just for one day to learn what it is like, what would you do?

If you could count homeless as a job, my answer is a homeless.

>> If you could count being a homeless as a job, then that\'s my answer.


 I think I can sincerely enjoy it, if it\'s going to be only for one day.

>> I think I can sincerely enjoy it, if it\'s for one day only.

 Just imagine how wonderful it is.

>> correct


 You can lie everywhere, you can yell everyone, you can pee whenever you want and the best part is you can s[이름]p as possible as you can!

>> You can lie everywhere, you can yell at everyone, you pee anywhere you want, and the best part is you can s[이름]p as much as you want.

 It will be an one day vacation for me.

>> It will be like a one-day vacation for me.

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