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2018-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> If you could play any musical instrument, what would it be? Why? I think that it slightly misses the mark but I want to perfectly control my vocal cord as an instrument. I believe that only singing can fully approach sensitive moods of humans. The vocal cords are not simply able to express the pitch or intensity of the note, but a variety of tones and rich expressions. It is also a strength that singing is not limited to time and place. If I could play any musical instrument, why not I would play the best one?

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

If you could play any musical instrument, what would it be? Why?

I think that it slightly misses the mark but I want to perfectly control my vocal cord as an instrument.

>> I think that my answer is quite unresponsive, but I want to perfectly control my vocal cord just like an instrument.

I believe that only singing can fully approach sensitive moods of humans.

>> I believe that only singing can fully affect the sensitive moods of humans.

The vocal cords are not simply able to express the pitch or intensity of the note, but a variety of tones and rich expressions.

>> The vocal cords not only simply express the pitch or intensity of the note, but also a variety of tones and rich expressions.

It is also a strength that singing is not limited to time and place.

>> Another benefit of training your vocal cords is that singing is not restricted in terms of time and place.

If I could play any musical instrument, why not I would play the best one?

>> If I could play any musical instrument, why not choose the best one?

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