12.1 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It's a nice day starting this month. Good luck!
Have your leisure activities changed since you were a child?
Yes. My leisure activities have changed very much since I was a child. When I was a child,I spent my free time to play with my friends,but after I became an adult,I tried to spend my free time improving my abilities.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework today. Enjoy your leisure time and have fun in discovering more of your abilities. Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi there!
>> Correct.
It\'s a nice day starting this month.
>> It\'s a nice day to start this month.
Good luck!
>> Correct.Have your leisure activities changed since you were a child?Yes. My leisure activities have changed very much since I was a child.
>> Correct.
When I was a child, I spent my free time to play with my friends,but after I became an adult,I tried to spend my free time improving my abilities.>> When I was a child, I spent my free time in playing with my friends, but after I became an adult, I tried to spend my free time in improving my abilities.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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