12.1 Homework

2014-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! It's a nice day starting this month. Good luck! Have your leisure activities changed since you were a child? Yes. My leisure activities have changed very much since I was a child. When I was a child,I spent my free time to play with my friends,but after I became an adult,I tried to spend my free time improving my abilities. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework today. Enjoy your leisure time and have fun in discovering more of your abilities. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! >> Correct. It\'s a nice day starting this month. >> It\'s a nice day to start this month. Good luck! >> Correct.Have your leisure activities changed since you were a child?Yes. My leisure activities have changed very much since I was a child. >> Correct. When I was a child, I spent my free time to play with my friends,but after I became an adult,I tried to spend my free time improving my abilities.>> When I was a child, I spent my free time in playing with my friends, but after I became an adult, I tried to spend my free time in improving my abilities.Thank you! >> Correct.

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