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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Do you think athletes earn enough money, not enough money or too much money? I think that only few athletes could earn enough money as a reward of their efforts. Many Olympic gold medalists of unpopular sports are living in poverty or having a job with no common with sports. But although gold medalists can be said that are living well comparing silver or bronze medalists. However the worst part wasn\'t started yet. The worst part is that it is no exaggeration to say that athletes who do not have medals or are not Olympic sports player cannot carry their lives themselves finacially at all.

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Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

Do you think athletes earn enough money, not enough money or too much money?

I think that only few athletes could earn enough money as a reward of their efforts.

>> I think that only a few athletes could earn enough money as a reward of their efforts.

Many Olympic gold medalists of unpopular sports are living in poverty or having a job with no common with sports.

>> Many Olympic gold medalists of unpopular sports are living in poverty or having common jobs that aren\'t related to sports.

But although gold medalists can be said that are living well comparing silver or bronze medalists.

>> However, some gold medalists are apparently living well compared to the silver or bronze titleholders.

However the worst part wasn\'t started yet.

>> This isn\'t even the worst thing yet.

The worst part is that it is no exaggeration to say that athletes who do not have medals or are not Olympic sports player cannot carry their lives themselves finacially at all.

>> The worst part is that it is no exaggeration to say that athletes who not have medals or aren\'t Olympians don\'t live a financially stable life.

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