12.10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon,Ma'am?
I drunk yesterday.I am still tipsy.I don't feel well.
Homework
When are the best times for silence?
I can't understand what is the meaning of silence. You means quiet or meditation?
If silence means meditation,I am used to have times for silence at the church before Mass.It is good for my emotional health.In addition,it gives me a little concentration.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even if you are feeling tipsy. I think you drunk too much last night. Just have a warm soup so you will feel better. Have a great day and I will call you again tomorrow.
~KELLY~
Good afternoon, Ma\'am?
>> Correct
(Check your punctuation) Good afternoon, ma\'am!
I drunk yesterday. I am still tipsy. I don\'t feel well.>> Correct HomeworkWhen are the best times for silence?I can\'t understand what is the meaning of silence.
>> I don\'t understand the meaning of \"silence\".
You means quiet or meditation?
>> Does it mean being quiet or meditation?If silence means meditation, I am used to have times for silence at the church before Mass.
>> If silence means meditation, I usually have times for silence at the church before a mass starts.
It is good for my emotional health.
>> Correct
In addition, it gives me a little concentration.>> Correct
>> OR: It allows me to concentrate a little.Thank you!
>> Correct
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