12/10 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^ You gave good thoughts on this one. A sincerest apology is necessary and of course make sure that it will never happen again, because like what you have said, it may tarnish your reputation and your good relationship with the people you commit to. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I really don\'t want to imagine about this situation.
>>Correct
If I will late for an important interview to get a job, it is terrible.
>>If I will be late for an important job interview, it would be terrible.
But, If it is not relate the business, I think I could be excused.
>>But if it is not business related, I think I could be excused.
I should explain about the reason why I late for the appointment.
>>I would explain the reason why I am late for the appointment.
Many people make a plausible excuse at that time.
>>Many people give plausible excuses for this kind of situation.
For example, they were late due to the traffic jam or someone need to help or lost the road.
>>For example, they were late due to the traffic jam or someone needs help or lost on the road.
I think best way to be understood is an apology sincerely.
>>I think the best way to be understood is to give a sincere apology.
Even if they was upset to me, they can give one more chance to cover the fault.
>>Even if they would feel upset, they can consider my excuse and would give me a chance.
However, if I will late again after then, I can not return the relationship.
>>However, if I will be late again after that, I can no longer make excuses and maybe they can no longer maintain a good relationship with me.
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