12/10 homework
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I don\'t want to understand them.
I know there are a lot of good men and women in the world.
Sometimes I also imagine a different life with a different husband when I meet a very nice man.
But, I think the sense of honor is as important as love between married couples.
Loyalty is another form of love.
The divorce rate is increasing in Korea.
Even if couples have fallen out of love with each other, it can no be a reason for cheating.
At least, they have to find a new lover after clearing up the relationship.
Even not married couples, they have to be polite about the relationship.
My ex-boyfriend got a new girlfriend as soon as we broke up, besides, she was my ex-boyfriend\'s colleague I knew.
I was so tired of betrayal for a while.
One of my friends made a new boyfriend while preparing for marriage, eventually, she broke up and married a new boyfriend.
Even though they are relieved that they have found true love, they should know that their rude behavior hurt someone deeply.
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름] for this wonderful and well thought of homework. I really appreciate the effort you put to every homework I give you.
I totally agree with you. It\'s a very painful process to be in this kind of situation where one of the partners would cheat on the other. It is devastating and could even destroy a person. It would even take time for healing to come. I hope people could think and reflect more before doing something. Every action has a consequences so we better give it a thorough thought. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I don\'t want to understand them.
>>CORRECT
I know there are a lot of good men and women in the world.
I know there are a lot of good men and women in the world.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes I also imagine a different life with a different husband when I meet a very nice man.
Sometimes I also imagine a different life with a different husband when I meet a very nice man.
>>CORRECT
But, I think the sense of honor is as important as love between married couples.
But, I think the sense of honor is as important as love between married couples.
>>CORRECT
Loyalty is another form of love.
Loyalty is another form of love.
>>CORRECT
The divorce rate is increasing in Korea.
The divorce rate is increasing in Korea.
>>CORRECT
Even if couples have fallen out of love with each other, it can no be a reason for cheating.
Even if couples have fallen out of love with each other, it can no be a reason for cheating.
>>Even if couples have fallen out of love with each other, it can not be a reason for cheating.
At least, they have to find a new lover after clearing up the relationship.
At least, they have to find a new lover after clearing up the relationship.
>>CORRECT
Even not married couples, they have to be polite about the relationship.
Even not married couples, they have to be polite about the relationship.
>>Even for not married couples, they have to respect the relationship.
My ex-boyfriend got a new girlfriend as soon as we broke up, besides, she was my ex-boyfriend\'s colleague I knew.
My ex-boyfriend got a new girlfriend as soon as we broke up, besides, she was my ex-boyfriend\'s colleague I knew.
>>My ex-boyfriend got a new girlfriend as soon as we broke up, and I was even aware that she was my ex-boyfriend\'s colleague.
I was so tired of betrayal for a while.
I was so tired of betrayal for a while.
>>CORRECT
One of my friends made a new boyfriend while preparing for marriage, eventually, she broke up and married a new boyfriend.
One of my friends made a new boyfriend while preparing for marriage, eventually, she broke up and married a new boyfriend.
>>One of my friends made a new boyfriend while preparing for marriage, eventually, she broke up with her fiance and married the new boyfriend.
Even though they are relieved that they have found true love, they should know that their rude behavior hurt someone deeply.
Even though they are relieved that they have found true love, they should know that their rude behavior hurt someone deeply.
>>CORRECT
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