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How are you, T.Winne? Please check my homework and modify any wrong sentences. 1. Nowadays, our company had a problem of the new equipment so our leader sent a forceful message to the supplier. 2. What is your important goal on this chistmas day? 3. Even if you have a powerful position, exerting to our citizen should be avoided. 4. Are you interesting in the lastest fashion? 5. All of parents are very important to their baby, because they give them a lot of influence. How about your opinon? My brother said that I counldn't quarrel with my wife even though I want. Because my son was watching us. I really agree that. As you know, someone said that your baby is a mirror which reflects you. Do you have any schedule for the end of this year?? See you!!

Hi Sir [이름], A wonderful Wednesday to you.I do agree with your brother because it can cause damage to your child. In my case,I try to settle problems with my husband while my child is asleep. Well anyway,I hope that things will get better. Just keep smilling....:)   T.Winnie   Here\'s the corrections:   How are you, T.Winne? >>CORRECTPlease check my homework and modify any wrong sentences. >>Please check my homework and modify any wrong sentence.1. Nowadays, our company had a problem of the new equipment so our leader sent a forceful message to the supplier. >>Nowadays,our company had a problem with the new equipment so our leader sent a forceful message to the supplier.2. What is your important goal on this chistmas day? >>What is your plan for christmas?3. Even if you have a powerful position, exerting to our citizen should be avoided. >>Even if you have a high position,exerting power to our citizen should be avoided.4. Are you interesting in the lastest fashion? >>Are you interested with the latest fashion?5. All of parents are very important to their baby, because they give them a lot of influence. How about your opinon?>>All parents are very important to their baby because they influenced them a lot. What\'s your opinion?My brother said that I counldn\'t quarrel with my wife even though I want. >>My brother told me that I can\'t fight with my wife even if I wanted to. Because my son was watching us. >>CORRECT  I really agree that. >>I really agree with that./I strongly agree with that.As you know, someone said that your baby is a mirror which reflects you. >>CORRECTDo you have any schedule for the end of this year?? >>Do you have any plans for this year end?