12.11 Homework

2013-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning.I feel well today. Homework What can people do to stop cyberbullying? Cyberbullying? This word is unfamiliar for me. I think human must live in helping each other.However there are a lot of people who do not that.I don't know why they do such a cyberbullying. We should try each other in order to create a beautiful world. And the man of guilty must be punished.I like an obviousness. Thank you!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homeowrk today. I really hope that everyone must help one another in building a beautiful world to live in. Have a great Wednesday, Sir! ~KELLY~ Hi there! Good morning. I feel well today.>> Correct. >> OR: I feel better today.HomeworkWhat can people do to stop cyberbullying?Cyberbullying?This word is unfamiliar for me. >> This word is unfamiliar to me. >> Cyberbullying is the act of harassing someone online by sending or posting mean messages.   I think human must live in helping each other. >> I think humans must live in helping each other. However there are a lot of people who do not that. >> However, there are a lot of people who do not do that. I don\'t know why they do such a cyberbullying. >> I don\'t know why they do cyberbullying. We should try each other in order to create a beautiful world. >> We should try and help each other in order to create a beautiful world. And the man of guilty must be punished. >> And anybody who would be found guilty must be punished. I like an obviousness. >> I like transparency.Thank you! >> Correct.

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