12.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning.I feel well today.
Homework
What can people do to stop cyberbullying?
Cyberbullying?
This word is unfamiliar for me. I think human must live in helping each other.However there are a lot of people who do not that.I don't know why they do such a cyberbullying. We should try each other in order to create a beautiful world. And the man of guilty must be punished.I like an obviousness.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homeowrk today. I really hope that everyone must help one another in building a beautiful world to live in. Have a great Wednesday, Sir!
~KELLY~
Hi there! Good morning. I feel well today.>> Correct.
>> OR: I feel better today.HomeworkWhat can people do to stop cyberbullying?Cyberbullying?This word is unfamiliar for me.
>> This word is unfamiliar to me.
>> Cyberbullying is the act of harassing someone online by sending or posting mean messages.
I think human must live in helping each other.
>> I think humans must live in helping each other.
However there are a lot of people who do not that.
>> However, there are a lot of people who do not do that.
I don\'t know why they do such a cyberbullying.
>> I don\'t know why they do cyberbullying.
We should try each other in order to create a beautiful world.
>> We should try and help each other in order to create a beautiful world.
And the man of guilty must be punished.
>> And anybody who would be found guilty must be punished.
I like an obviousness.
>> I like transparency.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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