12.11 Homework

2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! I am having a get-together with my boss tonight.I might drink some alcohol.I am afraid of the class tomorrow. What is bullying,and how can it be avoided in the society. Bullying is the phenomenon that tormenting someone occurs constantly and repeatedly. To avoid it, we must strive make up for our weak points. When we are in that situation,we must ask our family members and friends for a help.I am sure that bullying is a big issue these days and need to be stopped. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Anyway, don\'t worry about class tomorrow. Just have fun and enjoy your get together tonight. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! >> Correct. I am having a get-together with my boss tonight. >> I am going to have a get together with my boss tonight. I might drink some alcohol. >> Correct. I am afraid of the class tomorrow.>> I am worried of the class tomorrow.What is bullying,and how can it be avoided in the society.Bullying is the phenomenon that tormenting someone occurs constantly and repeatedly. >> Bullying is the phenomenon that torments someone constantly and repeatedly. To avoid it, we must strive make up for our weak points. >> To avoid it, we must strive hard and make up for our weak points. When we are in that situation, we must ask our family members and friends for a help. >> When we are in that situation, we must ask our family members and friends for help. I am sure that bullying is a big issue these days and need to be stopped.>> I am sure that bullying is a big issue these days and it needs to be stopped.Thank you! >> Correct.

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