12/11 homework

2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be?] If I could change one thing in my past life,I want to back to my Ph. D period and change my dissertation to be better. Every researcher want to submit better article. When I was Ph.D candidate, I did what I best. But, I think it was not sufficient and I didn't know well about the research. If I return to that period, I would be better. I know every researcher maybe think like me. So, the important thing is development by myself day by day. I like the sentence "Failure teaches success".

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! A wonderful day to you! So nice of you to accomplish your homework on time. I appreciate it! ^ ^

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. We all have that feeling of not being able to do our best in the past. But, the important thing now is the present. Like what you have said; improve ourselves everyday! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



If I could change one thing in my past life,I want to back to my Ph. D period and change my dissertation to be better.

>>If I could change one thing in my past life,I want to go back to my Ph. D period and change my dissertation to be better. 
Every researcher want to submit better article.

>>Every researcher wants to submit a good article. 
When I was Ph.D candidate, I did what I best.

>>When I was a Ph.D candidate, I did my best. 
But, I think it was not sufficient and I didn\'t know well about the research.

>>Correct
If I return to that period, I would be better.

>>If I would go back to that time, I will do better.
I know every researcher maybe think like me.

>>I know every researcher would think like me. 
So, the important thing is development by myself day by day.

>>So, the important thing is to improve myself more everyday. 
I like the sentence \"Failure teaches success\".

>>Correct or

>>I like the saying; \"Failure teaches success\".

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