12/11 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What simple things do you do that makes your partner/husband happy?]
My husband is a very simple person.
Sometimes I thought he like a young boy.
When I praise him, he looks so happy like a child.
And He wants to do it more what I like.
When I blame him for his fault, he also blames me for what is my fault.
So, I understood him last year that if I give him one thing, he wants to give me two things, but if I blame him, he finds more stong words to hurt me.
After then, when I fight him, I complain and explain about his fault very kindly \"I was very sad about your actions, and I would be happy next time if you didn\'t do that\".
I think it is like a conversation skill when the mother disciplines her child.
What\'s important is that it works for him.
At this point, I absolutely agree with the phrase that women are much more complicated than men.
Anyway, when he looks happy with my happiness, I am also happy.
Maybe this is love and we are finding the way to be happy.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Very well said and very well thought of answer! ^ ^ Thank you so much for your thoughts! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
My husband is a very simple person.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes I thought he like a young boy.
Sometimes I thought he like a young boy.
>>Sometimes I think he is just like a young boy.
When I praise him, he looks so happy like a child.
When I praise him, he looks so happy like a child.
>>CORRECT
And He wants to do it more what I like.
And He wants to do it more what I like.
>>And he wants to do more of the things that I like.
When I blame him for his fault, he also blames me for what is my fault.
When I blame him for his fault, he also blames me for what is my fault.
>>CORRECT
So, I understood him last year that if I give him one thing, he wants to give me two things, but if I blame him, he finds more stong words to hurt me.
So, I understood him last year that if I give him one thing, he wants to give me two things, but if I blame him, he finds more stong words to hurt me.
>>So, I understood him last year when I give him one thing, he wants to give me two things, but if I blame him, he finds strong words to hurt me.
After then, when I fight him, I complain and explain about his fault very kindly \"I was very sad about your actions, and I would be happy next time if you didn\'t do that\".
After then, when I fight him, I complain and explain about his fault very kindly \"I was very sad about your actions, and I would be happy next time if you didn\'t do that\".
>>So when I fight him, I complain and explain about his fault very kindly \"I was very sad about your actions, and I would be happy next time if you didn\'t do that\".
I think it is like a conversation skill when the mother disciplines her child.
I think it is like a conversation skill when the mother disciplines her child.
>>CORRECT
What\'s important is that it works for him.
What\'s important is that it works for him.
>>CORRECT
At this point, I absolutely agree with the phrase that women are much more complicated than men.
At this point, I absolutely agree with the phrase that women are much more complicated than men.
>>CORRECT
Anyway, when he looks happy with my happiness, I am also happy.
Anyway, when he looks happy with my happiness, I am also happy.
>>CORRECT
Maybe this is love and we are finding the way to be happy.
Maybe this is love and we are finding the way to be happy.
>>CORRECT
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