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2018-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. power bank 2. mindset 3. practical 4. costly 5. reasonable price Buying Chinese products was regarded as a costly mistake. But Xiomi\'s power bank has changed consumer\'s mindset. Xiomi\'s power bank is making resonable price and quality go ahead and they are making buying their products experience reasonable and practical.

강사 첨삭

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Jean

1. power bank
2. mindset
3. practical
4. costly
5. reasonable price

Buying Chinese products was regarded as a costly mistake.

>> Buying Chinese products used to be regarded as a costly mistake.

But Xiomi\'s power bank has changed consumer\'s mindset.

>> However, Xiomi\'s power bank has changed the mindset of most consumers.

Xiomi\'s power bank is making resonable price and quality go ahead and they are making buying their products experience reasonable and practical.

>> The said gadget is of good quality and has a reasonable price. People probably buy this product as it\'s more practical since it\'s sold at a reasonable price.

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