12/12 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What have you learned so far from your work experience?]
I learned that there are many genii in this world, but researches and advances are not only for them.
There are many universities in Korea, and actually there is rank for the university.
So, most people think people in high-university will research better.
But, it is absolutely not.
I also had that kind of prejudice before graduate school.
But, when I attended an international conference, my prejudice was perfectly disappeared.
I met smart people who research in a very small university, even they are achieving recognition in the field.
I know that studying and investigating requires curiosity and persistence more to find new or advanced things, not a genius.
And I want to say it can be as efforts.
Surely if it can be added prodigious talent, the person will be a historical scientist.
So, I learned that wherever I am, it is important not to lose my scientific curiosity and challenging and inquiring minds.
강사 첨삭
WOW! Well composed homework [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one! ^ ^
I absolutely agree with you. Just because students come from a high ranking and expensive universities doesn\'t mean that they are all brilliant. Like what you have said, ability and effort can go a long way! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I learned that there are many genii in this world, but researches and advances are not only for them.
>>CORRECT
There are many universities in Korea, and actually there is rank for the university.
There are many universities in Korea, and actually there is rank for the university.
>>There are many universities in Korea, and actually there is a ranking for universities.
So, most people think people in high-university will research better.
So, most people think people in high-university will research better.
>>So, most people think that students/graduates from a high-university will research/do better.
But, it is absolutely not.
But, it is absolutely not.
>>CORRECT
I also had that kind of prejudice before graduate school.
I also had that kind of prejudice before graduate school.
>>CORRECT
But, when I attended an international conference, my prejudice was perfectly disappeared.
But, when I attended an international conference, my prejudice was perfectly disappeared.
>>But, when I attended an international conference, my prejudice became less.
I met smart people who research in a very small university, even they are achieving recognition in the field.
I met smart people who research in a very small university, even they are achieving recognition in the field.
>>I met smart people who do research in a very small university, and they are achieving recognition in the field.
I know that studying and investigating requires curiosity and persistence more to find new or advanced things, not a genius.
I know that studying and investigating requires curiosity and persistence more to find new or advanced things, not a genius.
>>CORRECT
And I want to say it can be as efforts.
And I want to say it can be as efforts.
>>And I want to say that it has to do more with a person\'s efforts.
Surely if it can be added prodigious talent, the person will be a historical scientist.
Surely if it can be added prodigious talent, the person will be a historical scientist.
>>CORRECT
So, I learned that wherever I am, it is important not to lose my scientific curiosity and challenging and inquiring minds.
So, I learned that wherever I am, it is important not to lose my scientific curiosity and challenging and inquiring minds.
>>CORRECT
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