12.12Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
Homework
How would you protect children from the emotional struggles throughout school life? How would you teach to get over these struggles?
Basically, I want to give them having independence. Their job can be solved only by themselves. When my children is having emotional struggles,I should listen to their story carefully, and I will tell them my experience.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! WOW! You accomplished your homework early today. Thank you Sir. Anyway, I really admire you as a father because you are very supportive with your children. Keep it up, Sir~
~KELLY~
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.HomeworkHow would you protect children from the emotional struggles throughout school life? How would you teach to get over these struggles?Basically, I want to give them having independence.
>> Basically, I want to give them independence.
Their job can be solved only by themselves.
>> They can solve their problems by themselves.
When my children is having emotional struggles, I should listen to their story carefully, and I will tell them my experience.>> When my children are having emotional struggles, I should listen to their story carefully, and I share them my experience as well.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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