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To tell the truth, I had lacked of confidence in the today's feedback because I thought that I had not spoken effectively and clearly in class today. Besides the business section which we discussed today wasn't a matter of my interest. I'm weak to financial and business parts. But your feedback brought me a hope! I want to be a good English speaker but I could have not concentrated on it. I feel tired these days because I have a lot of works to do. Sometimes I feel stressful of improving English. It doesn't mean I want to quit studying at all! But I can cheer up myself with your compliment. I wish I would be a good English speaker someday. I surely know I have to try hard. I always appreciate your kindness.

Hi [이름]!!! I am sorry if you felt that way. Though, I want you to know that my feedback is there to guide you and to make you the best speaker of English you could ever be. I love it that you gave yourself a chance to realize that it is for your own good. I did not mean to offend you or anything more. I hope you know that. Anyway, I have included here the correction of your composition. Hope this helps. Take care and have a great day ahead. -T. Jane -   To tell the truth, I had lacked of confidence in the today's feedback because I thought that I had not spoken effectively and clearly in class today. >> To tell the truth, I lacked confidence because of today’s feedback because I thought that I had not spoken effectively and clearly in our class today.Besides the business section which we discussed today wasn't a matter of my interest. >> And besides, the topic we discussed today isn’t my interest.I'm weak to financial and business parts. >> I’m weak when it comes to financial and business matters.But your feedback brought me a hope! >> Though, your feedback brought me hope!I want to be a good English speaker but I could have not concentrated on it. >> I want to be a good English speaker, but maybe I have not concentrated on it that much.I feel tired these days because I have a lot of works to do. >> CORRECT.Sometimes I feel stressful of improving English. >> Sometimes, I feel stressed in improving my English skills. It doesn't mean I want to quit studying at all! >> Though, it doesn’t mean that I want to quit studying at all!But I can cheer up myself with your compliment. >> But despite all of these, I can still cheer myself up with your compliments.I wish I would be a good English speaker someday. >> I wish I could be a good English speaker someday.I surely know I have to try hard. >> CORRECT.I always appreciate your kindness. >> CORRECT.