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2013-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Good morning! T.Winne~! It's really cold in Korea now. How is your weather today? ------------------------------- 1. I am to be the next host of the next meeting so I have to note about some notices to the members 2. What made you get errors in your homework? 3. In my view, this period is too short to accomplish our goal. 4. What is you next step for learning English? 5. Several items were delivered in our store and were stacked on the shelfs. -------------------------------- It snowed in Seoul including my wife's house yesterday and the snow was frozen on the road. And I will arrive at Seoul late as you know. That's why I am worried about going there. I dicussed about our christmas plans with my wife. I said I want to go out for enjoying our holiday but she said I want to stay in our house because it would be crowded at that time. How do I enjoy our christmas? Haha.. Anyway, have a nice day. See you soon. Bye!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, teacher here! Hope you are doing well even if the weather is cold.It is quite cold here in the Philippines but not the same as your temperature because we do not have winter.Be careful not to catch a cold.Well, it is good that you had consulted your wife first before making a decision for Christmas.I hope she will change her mind .I just wish you and your family a wonderful and bountiful Christmas. As to your homework, I can see that you are doing well with sentence construction because there are no major corrections .You are doing a great job and thank you for taking time to answer your homework even with your busy schedule.I\'ll see you in class. ^^T. Winnie^^ Good morning! T.Winne~! >> Correct It\'s really cold in Korea now.>> Correct How is your weather today? >> Correct -------------------------------1. I am to be the next host of the next meeting so I have to note aboutsome notices to the members >> I am going to be the next host of the upcoming meeting so I have to note some notices to the members. 2. What made you get errors in your homework? >> Correct3. In my view, this period is too short to accomplish our goal. >> In my point of view, this period is too short to accomplish our goal.4. What is you next step for learning English? >> Correct 5. Several items were delivered in our store and were stacked on the shelfs. >> Several items were delivered to our store and were stacked on the shelves.--------------------------------It snowed in Seoul including my wife\'s house yesterday and the snow was frozen >> It snowed in Seoul yesterday including at my wife\'s place and the snow had frozen on the road.on the road. And I will arrive at Seoul late as you know. That\'s why I am worried about going there. >> As you know, I will be arriving in Seoul late that is why I am worried about going there.I dicussed about our christmas plans with my wife. I said I want to go out for enjoying our holiday but she said I want to stay in our house because it would be crowded at that time. >> I had discussed my Christmas plans with my wife and told her that I want to go out for the holiday but she wants to stay at home instead because it would be crowded by that time. How do I enjoy our Christmas? Haha.. >> CorrectAnyway, have a nice day. >> Correct See you soon. Bye!! >> Correct

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