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2018-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. eclectic taste in music 2. political ally 3. innocent 4. demonstration 5. life imprisonment 1. Simply saying her taste in music is eclectic. 2. President Noh and president Moon were kind of political allys for each other. 3. No one can have an objection to he is innocent. 4. Only history knows that it was a peaceful demonstration 5. Owing to his karma, he has been sentenced to life imprisonment.

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1. eclectic taste in music
2. political ally
3. innocent
4. demonstration
5. life imprisonment

1. Simply saying her taste in music is eclectic.

>> Simply saying, her taste in music is eclectic.


 2. President Noh and president Moon were kind of political allys for each other.

>> Presidents Noh and Moon are political allies.


 3. No one can have an objection to he is innocent.

>> No one objected that he is innocent.


 4. Only history knows that it was a peaceful demonstration

>> Only history will tell whether it was a peaceful demonstration.

 5. Owing to his karma, he has been sentenced to life imprisonment.

>> or: Owing to karma, he has been sentenced to life imprisonment.

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