12/13 homework
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Hi [이름]! An awesome day to you! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^
I admire your thoughts on this one. It is actually really hard to judge a person who wants to commit or have already committed suicide. Maybe because of physical, emotional or mental pain. But you are right, we do have a limited understanding on the matter. I hope we can probe more so we can have a better understanding about it! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I recently read a book, and I change my mind about the suicide.
>>I recently read a book, and it has changed my perception about suicide.
I though that a person who want to commit suicide or did it is really stupid.
>>I thought that a person who wants to commit suicide or has done it is really stupid.
If they have courage to suicide, they can live very well.
>>If they have the courage to commit suicide, then it means they can endure life. (I hope this is what you mean)
But, I read in the book which sometime people commit suicide to keep their dignity.
>>But I read in the book that the reason why people commit suicide is because they want to keep their dignity.
Some people commit suicide to assert they was innocent.
>>Some people commit suicide to assert their innocence.
Or, some patient want to commit suicide to get out of impatient pain.
>>Or, some patients want to commit suicide to free themselves of unbearable pain.
In this case, the patient says they are alive, but they already died.
>>In this case, the patient says they are alive, but they actually feel dead.
I think we can understand about the suicide in very limited situation.
>>I think we have a limited understanding about suicide and why people commit it.
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