12/13 homework

2018-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Why do people commit suicide? What would you say to a person who wants to commit suicide?] I recently read a book, and I change my mind about the suicide. I though that a person who want to commit suicide or did it is really stupid. If they have courage to suicide, they can live very well. But, I read in the book which sometime people commit suicide to keep their dignity. Some people commit suicide to assert they was innocent. Or, some patient want to commit suicide to get out of impatient pain. In this case, the patient says they are alive, but they already died. I think we can understand about the suicide in very limited situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! An awesome day to you! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^

I admire your thoughts on this one. It is actually really hard to judge a person who wants to commit or have already committed suicide. Maybe because of physical, emotional or mental pain. But you are right, we do have a limited understanding on the matter. I hope we can probe more so we can have a better understanding about it! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I recently read a book, and I change my mind about the suicide.

>>I recently read a book, and it has changed my perception about suicide.
I though that a person who want to commit suicide or did it is really stupid.

>>I thought that a person who wants to commit suicide or has done it is really stupid.
If they have courage to suicide, they can live very well.

>>If they have the courage to commit suicide, then it means they can endure life. (I hope this is what you mean) 
But, I read in the book which sometime people commit suicide to keep their dignity.

>>But I read in the book that the reason why people commit suicide is because they want to keep their dignity.
Some people commit suicide to assert they was innocent.

>>Some people commit suicide to assert their innocence. 
Or, some patient want to commit suicide to get out of impatient pain.

>>Or, some patients want to commit suicide to free themselves of unbearable pain.
In this case, the patient says they are alive, but they already died.

>>In this case, the patient says they are alive, but they actually feel dead. 
I think we can understand about the suicide in very limited situation.

>>I think we have a limited understanding about suicide and why people commit it.

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