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>> Can two people fall in love over the internet without meeting each other first?
There is a research that exactly same as your question.
>> There is a research that studied this topic.
Accroding to that research, surprisingly, the meeting on the Internet has more chances to be going to fall in love each other than the meeting in the real world.
>> According to the said research, surprisingly, there is a higher chance to fall in love when people meet on the Internet than when they meet in person.
This is because that people imagine partner\'s appearance as their ideal type when they couldn\'t see the real one.
>> This is because people imagine their partner\'s appearance as their ideal type when they couldn\'t see the individual in person.
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