12/15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Parents is the best teacher in my life.
I've never seen the couple like them.
They love each other.
They seem to love until now although it passed by 30 years.
Especially I want my husband to follow my daddy.
My daddy is so kind. He has never fogotten special day like wedding aniversary , birthday.
He is always ready for supried party to make mommy happy.
He is also kind to me and my sister.
My mother is a good wife, too.
I want to have a wonderful time with my husband like my parent for a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Amy.
I really envy your parents. I also hope that you and your husband will always be happy until the end of time. Take care always and have a good rest during the weekend.
Teacher Michelle
Parents is the best teacher in my life.
>>Parents are the best teachers in life.I\'ve never seen the couple like them.
>>I\'ve never seen a couple like them.They love each other. >>Correct
They seem to love until now although it passed by 30 years.
>>They seem to love each other until now although 30 years had passed.Especially I want my husband to follow my daddy.
>>CorrectMy daddy is so kind. He has never fogotten special day like wedding aniversary , birthday.
>>My dad is so kind. he has never forgotten special days like wedding anniversaried and birthdays.He is always ready for supried party to make mommy happy.
>>He is always ready for a surprised party to make my mommy happy.He is also kind to me and my sister.
>>CorrectMy mother is a good wife, too. >>CorrectI want to have a wonderful time with my husband like my parent for a long time.
>>Correct
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