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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Good morning! T.Alice!! I'm also happy to see you again. ^^ Do you know a period of our previous class exactly ? Because if you were my last teacher in last summer, I have something to tell you. ^^ Anyway, please chenk my homework. 1. Do you know the reason _why_ she is so upset? 2. The day _when_ you saw me I was feeling sick. 3. The library is a place _where_you can borrow books. 4. That is the house _where_ we used to live. 5. This is the reason _why_ I never call her. Nowadays, I'm trying to prepare Toeic test on upcoming January. Until now, I didn't invest my time to preparing Toeic test but I will do my best. And I'm going to do our class with our textbook. It's about Free-talking and on page 41 probably. ^^ As you mentioned, the communication is more important than the grammer.Haha.. I will wait your call at home. Have a wonderful day and see you at night~~!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I hope you are having a wonderful day.

Congratulations on getting a perfect score on the homework. I know nothing less can be expected from you!

Regarding last summer\'s classes, I will have to check the old records to know for sure which is which. I will let you know next time we have a class, then you can tell me whatever it is that you seem to be so excited about to tell me. I\'m quite intrigued about it now.^^

Enjoy the rest of your day. I\'m looking forward to talking with you again.^^

 Good morning! T.Alice!!

>>CORRECT!!

>>OR Good morning, T. Alice!
I\'m also happy to see you again. ^^

>>CORRECT!!
Do you know a period of our previous class exactly ?

>>Do you know exactly when our previous class was?

OR>> Do you know the exact period of our previous class?
Because if you were my last teacher in last summer, I have something to tell you.^^

>>Because if you were my teacher last summer, I have something to tell you.
Anyway, please chenk my homework.

>>Anyway, please check my homework.

1. Do you know the reason _why_ she is so upset?

>>CORRECT!!
2. The day _when_ you saw me I was feeling sick.

>>CORRECT!!
3. The library is a place _where_you can borrow books.

>>CORRECT!!

4. That is the house _where_ we used to live.

>>CORRECT!!

5. This is the reason _why_ I never call her.

>>CORRECT!!
Nowadays, I\'m trying to prepare Toeic test on upcoming January.

>>Nowadays, I\'m trying to prepare for an upcoming TOEIC in January.
Until now, I didn\'t invest my time to preparing Toeic test but I will do my best.

>>I haven\'t invested my time on preparing for the TOEIC until now, but I will do my best.
And I\'m going to do our class with our textbook.

>>And I\'m going to use our textbook in class.

It\'s about Free-talking and on page 41 probably. ^^

>>CORRECT
As you mentioned, the communication is more important than the grammer.Haha..

>>As you mentioned, communication skill is more important than \"grammar\".

>>OR As you mentioned, speaking is more important than grammar. 
I will wait your call at home.

>>I will wait for your call at home.
Have a wonderful day and see you at night~~!!

>> Have a wonderful day and see you tonight.

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