12/16 Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
My hometown is [이름]ul, Korea.
[이름]ul is the capital of Korea, so there is many thing to attract people. For example, you can enjoy korean traditional palace in Gyeong-bok Palace.
Among a lot of popular thing in [이름]ul, Han river is the most famous space. Every summer, I go to Han river park to feel relax.
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[이름]ul is the capital of Korea, so there is many thing to attract people.
[이름]ul is the capital of Korea, so there is many thing to attract people.
>>[이름]ul is the capital of Korea, so there are many thing to attract people.
For example, you can enjoy korean traditional palace in Gyeong-bok Palace.
>>For example, you can see the Korean traditional palace which is called \"Gyeong-bok Palace\".
Among a lot of popular thing in [이름]ul, Han river is the most famous space.
>>Among all popular attractions in [이름]ul, the Han River is the most famous.
Every summer, I go to Han river park to feel relax.
>>Every summer, I go to the Han River Park to feel relaxed.
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