12.16 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! Once again Crismas is just around the corner.I have to take a annual confession tonight.
When is the best time for a person to start looking for a job?
I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying.I got my job when I was a student.But these days,there ars not many good job than before.I am worried about my son's getting a job. He has to get a nice job next year. I hope that things are well for him.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your insights about finding a job in your country. Let\'s just hope that there are still good job opportunities for the [이름] generation so they can also establish a bright future. Anyway, have a safe and warm day.
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning!
>> Correct.
Once again Crismas is just around the corner.
>> Once again Chrismas is just around the corner.
I have to take a annual confession tonight.>> I have to make an annual confession tonight.When is the best time for a person to start looking for a job?I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying.
>> I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying.
I got my job when I was a student.
>> Correct.
But these days, there ars not many good job than before.>> But these days, there aren\'t many good jobs compared before.
I am worried about my son\'s getting a job.
>> I am worried about my son getting a job.
He has to get a nice job next year.
>> Correct.
I hope that things are well for him.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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