12.16 Homework

2014-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! Once again Crismas is just around the corner.I have to take a annual confession tonight. When is the best time for a person to start looking for a job? I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying.I got my job when I was a student.But these days,there ars not many good job than before.I am worried about my son's getting a job. He has to get a nice job next year. I hope that things are well for him. Thank you!

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Hello there Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your insights about finding a job in your country. Let\'s just hope that there are still good job opportunities for the [이름] generation so they can also establish a bright future. Anyway, have a safe and warm day. ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! >> Correct. Once again Crismas is just around the corner. >> Once again Chrismas is just around the corner. I have to take a annual confession tonight.>> I have to make an annual confession tonight.When is the best time for a person to start looking for a job?I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying. >> I think that it is the best time to start looking for a job while they are still studying. I got my job when I was a student. >> Correct. But these days, there ars not many good job than before.>> But these days, there aren\'t many good jobs compared before. I am worried about my son\'s getting a job. >> I am worried about my son getting a job. He has to get a nice job next year. >> Correct. I hope that things are well for him. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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