12/16 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Dwayne lives in seoul, South Korea
-- Dwayne lives in Seoul, South Korea
2. i want to buy a cold pepsi drink to quench my thirst.
-- I want to buy a cold Pepsi drink to quench my thirst
3. My uncle currently lives in vancouver, canada.
--My uncle currently lives in Vancouver, Canada.
4. I go jogging every tuesday, thursday, saturday and sunday.
--I go jogging every Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and Sunday.
5. samsung released their latest smart phone, the galaxy s III.
--Samsung released their latest smart phone, the Galaxy S III.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]!
Oh, I am missing you.
I hope that you are just doing fine.
I am so proud of you that you got a perfect score again.
Anyway, I hope to talk with you very soon.
Take care because I care.
-Teacher Chloe
1. Dwayne lives in seoul, South Korea-- Dwayne lives in Seoul, South Korea>>Correct!2. i want to buy a cold pepsi drink to quench my thirst. -- I want to buy a cold Pepsi drink to quench my thirst>>Correct!3. My uncle currently lives in vancouver, canada. --My uncle currently lives in Vancouver, Canada. >>Correct!4. I go jogging every tuesday, thursday, saturday and sunday. --I go jogging every Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and Sunday. >>Correct!5. samsung released their latest smart phone, the galaxy s III.--Samsung released their latest smart phone, the Galaxy S III.
>>Correct!
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