12/16 homework

2015-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Dwayne lives in seoul, South Korea -- Dwayne lives in Seoul, South Korea 2. i want to buy a cold pepsi drink to quench my thirst. -- I want to buy a cold Pepsi drink to quench my thirst 3. My uncle currently lives in vancouver, canada. --My uncle currently lives in Vancouver, Canada. 4. I go jogging every tuesday, thursday, saturday and sunday. --I go jogging every Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and Sunday. 5. samsung released their latest smart phone, the galaxy s III. --Samsung released their latest smart phone, the Galaxy S III.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Oh, I am missing you. I hope that you are just doing fine. I am so proud of you that you got a perfect score again. Anyway, I hope to talk with you very soon. Take care because I care. -Teacher Chloe 1. Dwayne lives in seoul, South Korea-- Dwayne lives in Seoul, South Korea>>Correct!2. i want to buy a cold pepsi drink to quench my thirst. -- I want to buy a cold Pepsi drink to quench my thirst>>Correct!3. My uncle currently lives in vancouver, canada. --My uncle currently lives in Vancouver, Canada. >>Correct!4. I go jogging every tuesday, thursday, saturday and sunday. --I go jogging every Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and Sunday. >>Correct!5. samsung released their latest smart phone, the galaxy s III.--Samsung released their latest smart phone, the Galaxy S III. >>Correct!

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