12.17 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
It is so late to submit my homework. I have a few meeting about budget of next year.I am sorry.
Homework
Is divorce a big problem in your country?
Divorce has become a social issue in korea. I think divorce is vice. [이름] people are thinking this problem too easily.They should be more careful before deciding get married. How can the future of children. I get angry about this irresponsible people.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
A gracious evening there to you!
Yeah, you\'ve got a point there!
People should be sensitive about this issue. Marriage is a lifetime commitment.
Anyway, thanks for sending his in.
Go over the corrections.
See you in class.
T. Kelly
Hi there!
>> correct!^^It is so late to submit my homework.
>> correct!^^I have a few meeting about budget of next year.I am sorry.>> I had a few meetings about the budget next year. I am sorry.HomeworkIs divorce a big problem in your country?Divorce has become a social issue in korea.
>> correct!^^ // Korea //
I think divorce is vice.
>> I think divorce is a vice. [이름] people are thinking this problem too easily.
>>Better: [이름] people are taking this problem for granted.
OR: >> [이름] people aren\'t taking this problem seriously.They should be more careful before deciding get married.
>>They should be more careful before deciding to get married.
How can the future of children.
>> What will be the future of their children.?
I get angry about this irresponsible people.>> I\'m angry to these irresponsible people.
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