12.17 Homework

2013-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! It is so late to submit my homework. I have a few meeting about budget of next year.I am sorry. Homework Is divorce a big problem in your country? Divorce has become a social issue in korea. I think divorce is vice. [이름] people are thinking this problem too easily.They should be more careful before deciding get married. How can the future of children. I get angry about this irresponsible people. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! A gracious evening there to you! Yeah, you\'ve got a point there! People should be sensitive about this issue. Marriage is a lifetime commitment. Anyway, thanks for sending his in. Go over the corrections. See you in class. T. Kelly Hi there! >> correct!^^It is so late to submit my homework. >> correct!^^I have a few meeting about budget of next year.I am sorry.>> I had a few meetings about the budget next year. I am sorry.HomeworkIs divorce a big problem in your country?Divorce has become a social issue in korea. >> correct!^^ // Korea // I think divorce is vice. >> I think divorce is a vice. [이름] people are thinking this problem too easily. >>Better: [이름] people are taking this problem for granted. OR: >> [이름] people aren\'t taking this problem seriously.They should be more careful before deciding get married. >>They should be more careful before deciding to get married. How can the future of children. >> What will be the future of their children.? I get angry about this irresponsible people.>> I\'m angry to these irresponsible people.  

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