12.17 Homework

2014-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon! I am busy now. My boss is changed,so I have a ton of things to report. I have a headache... If your friends were doing something dangerous or illegal,would you tell their parents? Why? Yes. I would tell their parents dangerous situation for my friends. so,they can prevent a great risk in advance. All my friends are older, and our parents have already passed away.I miss my parents. Thank you!

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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even you are very busy now. Just go over my corrections of you have time. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon! I am busy now. >> Correct. My boss is changed, so I have a ton of things to report. >> My boss was changed, so I have a ton of things to report. >> OR: I have a new boss, so I have a ton of things to report. I have a headache... >> Correct.If your friends were doing something dangerous or illegal,would you tell their parents?Why?Yes. I would tell their parents dangerous situation for my friends. >> Yes. I would tell their parents of my friends that thyey are in a dangerous situation. so,they can prevent a great risk in advance. >> So they can prevent a more serious trouble in advance. All my friends are older, and our parents have already passed away. >> All my friends are old and our parents have already passed away. I miss my parents.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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