12.17 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! I am busy now. My boss is changed,so I have a ton of things to report. I have a headache...
If your friends were doing something dangerous or illegal,would you tell their parents?
Why?
Yes. I would tell their parents dangerous situation for my friends. so,they can prevent a great risk in advance. All my friends are older, and our parents have already passed away.I miss my parents.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework even you are very busy now. Just go over my corrections of you have time.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon! I am busy now.
>> Correct.
My boss is changed, so I have a ton of things to report.
>> My boss was changed, so I have a ton of things to report.
>> OR: I have a new boss, so I have a ton of things to report.
I have a headache...
>> Correct.If your friends were doing something dangerous or illegal,would you tell their parents?Why?Yes. I would tell their parents dangerous situation for my friends.
>> Yes. I would tell their parents of my friends that thyey are in a dangerous situation.
so,they can prevent a great risk in advance.
>> So they can prevent a more serious trouble in advance.
All my friends are older, and our parents have already passed away.
>> All my friends are old and our parents have already passed away.
I miss my parents.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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