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2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[If you could change one major historical event, what would it be?] I think maybe every Korean will say same thing, Japanese occupation. Japan gave us too much pain and Korea queen was killed from Japan. We can not forget the history, we learn about the pain and history from elementary school. If it was not occurred in Korea, the national grade or so many things will be changed. Above all, there are no people who lose the family from Japan. Japan said it was inevitable in their situation, but, no one can understand it. Even, the leaders of Japanese occupation are regarded as hero in Japan. Now, Korea and Japan have a relationship nationally. But, definitely we have the ice about the unclear history event. Because, Japan didn't apologize respectfully. I really hope to change this historical event, if I can do that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework and being so consistent with it. I appreciate it! ^ ^

Thank you for giving me a peek of your country\'s past. Indeed, it\'s something that left a scar in your country. But we always hope for the best.  I hope someday Japan would give their sincerest apologies to your country and that Korean people would find in their hearts acceptance and forgiveness of the past! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I think maybe every Korean will say same thing, Japanese occupation.

>>I think maybe, every Korean will say the same thing, the Japanese occupation.
Japan gave us too much pain and Korea queen was killed from Japan.

>>Japan gave us so much pain that even our Korean queen was killed (or assassinated) by the Japanese.
We can not forget the history, we learn about the pain and history from elementary school.

>>We can not forget our history, and the pain that goes with it which we learn from elementary school.
If it was not occurred in Korea, the national grade or so many things will be changed.

>>If it didn\'t happen, a lot of things would be different.
Above all, there are no people who lose the family from Japan.

>>Above all, lives wouldn\'t have been lost.
Japan said it was inevitable in their situation, but, no one can understand it.

>>Correct
Even, the leaders of Japanese occupation are regarded as hero in Japan.

>>Correct 
Now, Korea and Japan have a relationship nationally.

>>Now, Korea and Japan have established diplomatic relations.
But, definitely we have the ice about the unclear history event.

>>Correct
Because, Japan didn\'t apologize respectfully.

>>Correct or

>>Japan hasn\'t made it\'s sincerest apologies yet. 
I really hope to change this historical event, if I can do that.

>>Correct

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