12/17 homework
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[What kinds of crises occur in your workplace?]
My job has a relatively small crisis than other companies.
We don\'t need to sell something and don\'t a business.
But, it means it\'s not easy to earn money to study.
Researchers obtain funds from research projects.
Most of them are opened from the government and some companies request co-work with a budget.
I think the biggest crisis in my workplace is a rack of the research budget.
If we don\'t have a budget, we can not buy experimental tools.
It means we can not do research anymore.
But, the government has an interest in the research topic what is hot potato recently.
So, there is a trend in the research field.
Now, bio-industry is very popular and many research budgets are opened from that field.
So, we have a trend to drive to the popular field.
Researchers start a new study to get a budget or cheat their topic to show it is the popular field.
But, even the research field is not popular right now, we should prepare now for the future.
강사 첨삭
WOW! You gave me a better understanding about being in the research field. Thank you for sharing [이름]! I appreciate it! ^ ^
So the main concern is the budget. No budget, no research. That\'s why you have to continuously study and learn more about a lot of things. Sounds like a tough job for me. AJA! Ms. [이름]! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
We don\'t need to sell something and don\'t a business.
We don\'t need to sell something and don\'t a business.
>>We don\'t need to sell something and don\'t do business.
But, it means it\'s not easy to earn money to study.
But, it means it\'s not easy to earn money to study.
>>But, it means it\'s not easy to earn money doing research.
Researchers obtain funds from research projects.
Researchers obtain funds from research projects.
>>CORRECT
Most of them are opened from the government and some companies request co-work with a budget.
Most of them are opened from the government and some companies request co-work with a budget.
>>Most of the research projects are funded by the government and some private companies.
I think the biggest crisis in my workplace is a rack of the research budget.
I think the biggest crisis in my workplace is a rack of the research budget.
>>I think the biggest crisis in my workplace is the lack of research budget.
If we don\'t have a budget, we can not buy experimental tools.
If we don\'t have a budget, we can not buy experimental tools.
>>CORRECT
It means we can not do research anymore.
It means we can not do research anymore.
>>CORRECT
But, the government has an interest in the research topic what is hot potato recently.
But, the government has an interest in the research topic what is hot potato recently.
>>But, the government puts interest in research topics that is selling like a hot potato.
So, there is a trend in the research field.
So, there is a trend in the research field.
>>CORRECT
Now, bio-industry is very popular and many research budgets are opened from that field.
Now, bio-industry is very popular and many research budgets are opened from that field.
>>Now, bio-industry is very popular and many research budgets are opened for that field.
So, we have a trend to drive to the popular field.
So, we have a trend to drive to the popular field.
>>CORRECT
Researchers start a new study to get a budget or cheat their topic to show it is the popular field.
Researchers start a new study to get a budget or cheat their topic to show it is the popular field.
>>CORRECT
But, even the research field is not popular right now, we should prepare now for the future.
But, even the research field is not popular right now, we should prepare now for the future.
>>CORRECT
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