12.17 homwork
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1. move in
2. lease contract
3. move out
4. deposit
5. full amount
1. To weeks after moving in, my room is still messy.
2. I signed the lease contract through the real estate and then i am waiting to move in the new house.
3. I move out of my parents and it\'s been almost a year.
4. I made a desposit for 1 year and it\'ll be added about interest rates of 1.5%. It is really small amount.
5. I could get refund the full amount because i find the defect early and then demand to the customer center.
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1. move in
2. lease contract
3. move out
4. deposit
5. full amount
1. To weeks after moving in, my room is still messy.
>> Two weeks after moving in, my room is still messy.
2. I signed the lease contract through the real estate and then i am waiting to move in the new house.
>> I signed the lease contract through the real estate and am just waiting for the day when I can move into the new house.
3. I move out of my parents and it\'s been almost a year.
>> I moved out of my parents\' place and it\'s been almost a year.
4. I made a desposit for 1 year and it\'ll be added about interest rates of 1.5%. It is really small amount.
>> I gave a 1-year deposit and an interest rate of about 1.5% was added. It is really a small amount.
5. I could get refund the full amount because i find the defect early and then demand to the customer center.
>> I could get a full refund because I found the defect early and then complained to the customer center.
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