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I have a pair of shoes and my Mum has a pair of trainer. We want to play catch ball so we went outside. First, we ran.
\"Huff, huff.\" Then we start playing. \"You, threw it!\" But my Mum caught the ball.
The ball went on at my eye level. Of corse, I caght it. Then I threw the ball but my Mum is carl ess.
She can\'t caght the ball. So, I won the game.
-The End-
강사 첨삭
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Jean
I have a pair of shoes and my Mum has a pair of trainer.
>> I have a pair of shoes, and my Mum has a pair of trainers.
We want to play catch ball so we went outside.
>> We wanted to play catch so we went outside.
First, we ran.
>> correct
\"Huff, huff.\" Then we start playing.
>> \"Huff, huff.\" Then we started to play.
\"You, threw it!\" But my Mum caught the ball.
>> \"You, throw it!\" But my Mum caught the ball.
The ball went on at my eye level.
>> The ball was at my eye level.
Of corse, I caght it.
>> Of course, I caught it.
Then I threw the ball but my Mum is carl ess.
>> Then I threw the ball, but my Mum was careless.
She can\'t caght the ball. So, I won the game.
>> She couldn\'t catch the ball. So I won the game.
-The End-
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