12.18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's already Thursday. Christmas day is coming up.Meyyy Christmas!
Five years from now, what do you think would be the improvements in your career?
Of course, I think that I will retire from work after five years later.These days,we are spending too much time at work in Korea.I work 10 hours a day.The same is true for most employees in Korea.I think that it should be improved shortening work hours.We have a right to enjoy our life basically.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework early today. It\'s Christmas time once again. Merry Christmas, Mr. [이름]!
Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It\'s already Thursday. Christmas day is coming up.
>> Correct.
Meyyy Christmas!
>> Merry Christmas!
Five years from now, what do you think would be the improvements in your career?Of course, I think that I will retire from work after five years later.
>> Of course, I will retire from work after five years.
>> I will retire from work five years later.
These days, we are spending too much time at work in Korea.
>> Correct.
I work 10 hours a day.
>> Correct.The same is true for most employees in Korea.
>> Correct.
I think that it should be improved shortening work hours.
>> I think that it should be improved by shortening the working hours.
We have a right to enjoy our life basically.>> We have a right to enjoy our life.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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