12. 18 Homework
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Do you watch your weight? What foods do you think are healthy?
I sometimes check my weight and tried not to eat much food.
I know what foods are good for health. It is color foods!
Red-tomato, strawberry, watermelon, paprica/Orange-orange, paprica/Yellow-paprica, cari, potato, sweet potato/Green-paprica, vegetables/blue-bleuberry and so on. The color foods are good for our health and it is important to eat color foods in every our each meal. I have a goal in my winter vacation! I will eat color foods everyday and do Yoga for my health! I will make a plan soon.
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>> I sometimes check my weight and try not to eat lots of food.
I know what foods are good for health.
I know what foods are good for health.
>> I know what foods are good for my health.
It is color foods!
>> These are color foods!
Red-tomato, strawberry, watermelon, paprica/Orange-orange, paprica/Yellow-paprica, cari, potato, sweet potato/Green-paprica, vegetables/blue-bleuberry and so on.
Red-tomato, strawberry, watermelon, paprica/Orange-orange, paprica/Yellow-paprica, cari, potato, sweet potato/Green-paprica, vegetables/blue-bleuberry and so on.
>> Just like red-tomato, strawberry, watermelon, paprica/orange-orange, paprica/yellow-paprica, cari, potato, sweet potato/green-paprica, vegetables/blue-blueberry and so on.
The color foods are good for our health and it is important to eat color foods in every our each meal.
>> The color foods are good for our health and are important to eat in every meal.
I have a goal in my winter vacation!
>> I have a goal for my winter vacation!
I will eat color foods everyday and do Yoga for my health!
>> Correct!
I will make a plan soon.
>> Correct!
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