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2013-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi, there! T.Alice! 1. He's a _b) charming young doctor. 2. I plan on wearing my a) long black coat. 3. This is a b) well-known French painting from the 18th century. 4. She was wearing a _b) beautiful green dress. 5. The _a) poor little bird! I'm going to help it! How was my homework?? What if I make a mistake like yesterday? ㅋ(smiling) However, I'm OK, right? I'm a studying student. But until when? ㅜㅜ Please help me for my goal. I will end up being a good speaker in English. Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended 4 monthes ago. Honestly, I don't have any interest in plaing a game, but the game is..... Wow... Wow.. I am thinking the game is perfect and is charming to everyone, even you. But some problem were occured several days ago. I'm going to tell you in our class. Anyway.. I have a question about your career.. ^^ How long have you been teaching us? I mean a student. I will have a dinner with my friend. See you!!

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Hello Sir [이름]! Thank you so much for your time and effort in doing your homework. WOW! You had a perfect score! No mistakes today! Bravo!!! Yes, Sir [이름]. You are a studious student and I am very proud of you. It\'s because you always do your best to improve yourself! ^^ I have been teaching for years. But in this company, I have been teaching for almost two years (and counting, haha!). Catch you in class Sir! ~Teacher Alice   Hi, there! T.Alice! >> Hi there Teacher Alice! 1. He\'s a _b) charming young doctor. >> Correct!2. I plan on wearing my a) long black coat. >> Correct!3. This is a b) well-known French painting from the 18th century. >> Correct!4. She was wearing a _b) beautiful green dress. >> Correct!5. The _a) poor little bird! I\'m going to help it! >> Correct!How was my homework?? >> How is my homework? What if I make a mistake like yesterday? ㅋ(smiling) >> What if I\'ll have a mistake like yesterday? >> What if I made a mistake like yesterday? However, I\'m OK, right? >> Correct! I\'m a studying student. >> I\'m a studious student. But until when? ㅜㅜ >> Correct! Please help me for my goal. >> Please help me reach my goal. I will end up being a good speaker in English. >> Correct! **You sure will!Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended 4 monthes ago. >> Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended four months ago. Honestly, I don\'t have any interest in plaing a game, but the game is..... Wow... >> Honestly, I don\'t have any interest in playing a game, but the game is . . . Wow!Wow.. I am thinking the game is perfect and is charming to everyone, even you. >> Correct! But some problem were occured several days ago. >> But some problem occurred several days ago. I\'m going to tell you in our class. >> Correct!Anyway.. I have a question about your career.. ^^ >> Correct! How long have you been teaching us? >> Correct! I mean a student. >> Correct! I will have a dinner with my friend. >> I will have dinner with my friend. See you!! >> Correct!

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