12/19
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, there! T.Alice!
1. He's a _b) charming young doctor.
2. I plan on wearing my a) long black coat.
3. This is a b) well-known French painting from the 18th century.
4. She was wearing a _b) beautiful green dress.
5. The _a) poor little bird! I'm going to help it!
How was my homework?? What if I make a mistake like yesterday? ㅋ(smiling)
However, I'm OK, right? I'm a studying student. But until when? ㅜㅜ
Please help me for my goal. I will end up being a good speaker in English.
Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended 4 monthes ago.
Honestly, I don't have any interest in plaing a game, but the game is..... Wow...
Wow.. I am thinking the game is perfect and is charming to everyone, even you.
But some problem were occured several days ago. I'm going to tell you in our class.
Anyway.. I have a question about your career.. ^^ How long have you been teaching
us? I mean a student. I will have a dinner with my friend. See you!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time and effort in doing your homework.
WOW! You had a perfect score! No mistakes today! Bravo!!!
Yes, Sir [이름]. You are a studious student and I am very proud of you.
It\'s because you always do your best to improve yourself! ^^
I have been teaching for years. But in this company, I have been teaching for almost two years (and counting, haha!).
Catch you in class Sir!
~Teacher Alice
Hi, there! T.Alice!
>> Hi there Teacher Alice! 1. He\'s a _b) charming young doctor.
>> Correct!2. I plan on wearing my a) long black coat.
>> Correct!3. This is a b) well-known French painting from the 18th century.
>> Correct!4. She was wearing a _b) beautiful green dress.
>> Correct!5. The _a) poor little bird! I\'m going to help it!
>> Correct!How was my homework??
>> How is my homework?
What if I make a mistake like yesterday? ㅋ(smiling)
>> What if I\'ll have a mistake like yesterday?
>> What if I made a mistake like yesterday? However, I\'m OK, right?
>> Correct!
I\'m a studying student.
>> I\'m a studious student.
But until when? ㅜㅜ
>> Correct! Please help me for my goal.
>> Please help me reach my goal.
I will end up being a good speaker in English.
>> Correct! **You sure will!Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended 4 monthes ago.
>> Nowadays, I enjoy the game that my wife recommended four months ago. Honestly, I don\'t have any interest in plaing a game, but the game is..... Wow...
>> Honestly, I don\'t have any interest in playing a game, but the game is . . . Wow!Wow.. I am thinking the game is perfect and is charming to everyone, even you.
>> Correct! But some problem were occured several days ago.
>> But some problem occurred several days ago.
I\'m going to tell you in our class.
>> Correct!Anyway.. I have a question about your career.. ^^
>> Correct!
How long have you been teaching us?
>> Correct!
I mean a student.
>> Correct!
I will have a dinner with my friend.
>> I will have dinner with my friend.
See you!!
>> Correct!
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