12/19

TGIF~~! T.Alice! Snow was falling in the early morning. If it is snow on Christmas, it will be the great Christmas. ^^ /When was your best birthday? Why do you consider it the best so far?/ I'm not sure when it was my best birthday. But if I should select my best birthday, it might be my birthday with my wife from two years ago. Honestly, I don't care about my birthday. ^^ Even if my birthday is passed without any celebration or party, it doesn't matter to me. ha-ha Do you have any wonderful birthday? I had been lived in rural area in Chungcheng province. So when I was young, elementary, middle and high schoole, I didn't have a cake for my birthday party, but I don't have any complaint to my parents about it. Because I know that they do best to raise us. Do our best~!! Enjoy your lovely Friday. See you!!

Hi there! TGIF to you, too!! 

I hope you are having a lovely Friday as well!

Thank you for taking time to write this composition. Your thoughts on the matter are expressed well. Good job! I have spotted some minor grammar errors and wrote down suggestions on how the sentences should be written.^^

Next time we talk, maybe I can tell you about my best birthday, too.

Always keep warm so you won\'t catch a cold. It will be bad to be sick on Christmas.

I\'m looking forward to speaking to you again!

~T. Alice~

TGIF~~! T.Alice!

>> CORRECT!!
Snow was falling in the early morning.

>> Snow is falling early this morning.
If it is snow on Christmas, it will be the great Christmas. ^^

>> If it snows on Christmas, it will be a great Christmas. ^^

OR> It will be great if it snows on Christmas. ^^ 

/When was your best birthday? Why do you consider it the best so far?/
I\'m not sure when it was my best birthday.

>> I\'m not sure which one of my birthdays is the best.

OR> I\'m not sure which is my best birthday.
But if I should select my best birthday, it might be my birthday with my wife from two years ago.

>> But if I must select one as the best, it would be my birthday two years ago, which I celebrated with my wife.

OR> But if I must choose, it would be the birthday that I celebrated with my wife two years ago.

Honestly, I don\'t care about my birthday. ^^

>> CORRECT!!
 Even if my birthday is passed without any celebration or party, it doesn\'t matter to me.
>> It doesn\'t matter to me if my birthday passes without any kind of celebration or a party.

ha-ha

>> CORRECT!!^^

Do you have any wonderful birthday?

>> Do you have any wonderful birthdays?

OR> Have you had any wonderful birthdays?
I had been lived in rural area in Chungcheng province.

>> I lived in a rural area in Chungcheng Province.

So when I was young, elementary, middle and high schoole, I didn\'t have a cake for my birthday party, but I don\'t have any complaint to my parents about it.

>> So when I was young, in elementary school, middle school and high school, I didn\'t have a cake on my birthday parties but I didn\'t complain to my parents about it.   
Because I know that they do best to raise us.

>> This is because I know that they do their best to raise us.

Do our best~!!

>>Let us do our best!^^

Enjoy your lovely Friday.

>> CORRECT!!

See you!!

>> CORRECT!!^^