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Some people believe that Alternative Medicine can be combined with conventional medicine? Do you agree? Why or why not?
I can\'t agree that Alternative Medicine can be combined with conventional medicine. This is because, there is no research on how alternative medicine will affect our bodies, no one can predict what response to combine with conventional medicine.
>> I have to disagree that alternative medicine can be combined with conventional medicine due to lack of research on how the former affects our bodies. As a result, no one can predict the body\'s response to the combined medicines.
And also, to combine Alternative Medicine with conventional medicine is kind of insult to conventional medicine.
>> Moreover, to combine the two medicines is I believe a kind of insult to conventional medicine.
Alternative Medicine which are made up of misguided beliefs and false tools unlike conventional medicine has been proved that it is effective and safe for a long time with scientifically acurate measuring tools.
>> Alternative medicine, which is made up of misguided beliefs and false tools, unlike conventional medicine has been proved scientifically to be effective and safe.
No one should not ignore those affort.
>> These facts shouldn\'t be ignored.
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