12/19 homework

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. (However) I spoke to ... 2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. (On the other hand), there are some .... 3. (Firstly) , I would like to welcome .... 4. (Though) the film was a little boring, we still had ... 5. I've always known Caroline as a mean person. (Moreover) , she lent me $10 yesterday.... 6. I got up at 9 o'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. (Then), I had breakfast and ... 7. My brother works in a large office (Whereas) I work on my own at home. 8. Why do you think I don't want to go out tonight. (Actually) , I would be delighted to... 9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. (Al least), it gives you ... 10. I don't want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don't want to pay $40 for a ticket. (Besides) , look at the weather! All that rain!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^ You almost got them all right! Just a little confusion with \"at least\", \"however\" and \"moreover\".  However in a sentence shows contrast while moreover means in addition. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 


1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. (However) I spoke to ...
>>At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. (On the other hand), there are some ....
>>Correct
3. (Firstly) , I would like to welcome ....
>>Correct
4. (Though) the film was a little boring, we still had ...
>>Correct
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. (Moreover) , she lent me $10 yesterday....
>>However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. (Then), I had breakfast and ...
>>Correct
7. My brother works in a large office (Whereas) I work on my own at home.
>>Correct
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. (Actually) , I would be delighted to...
>>Correct
9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. (Al least), it gives you ...
>>Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get a better job.
10. I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. (Besides) , look at the weather! All that rain!

>>Correct

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