12.2 Homework

2014-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's getting colder. Take care! Do you prefer to spend your free time alone or with other people? I prefer to spend my free time with other people, but sometimes I love to stay at home alone. When I feel tired with my work,I often spend my free time to rest over sleeping or listen to music. But when I feel energetic,I like to spend my free time with other people,especially with my friends. Whenever I met them,I drank much achohol,so my wife don't like that behavior.But I often enjoy my free time with them talking about our life. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing what you do during your free time. Anyway, always keep yourself warm in this cold season. Enjoy the rest of your day. ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s getting colder. Take care!>> Correct.Do you prefer to spend your free time alone or with other people?I prefer to spend my free time with other people, but sometimes I love to stay at home alone. >> Correct. When I feel tired with my work, I often spend my free time to rest over sleeping or listen to music. >> When I feel tired with work. I often spend my free time by sleeping or listening to music. But when I feel energetic, I like to spend my free time with other people, especially with my friends. Whenever I met them, I drank much achohol, so my wife don\'t like that behavior. >> Whenever I met them, I drank much achohol, so my wife doesn\'t like that behavior. But I often enjoy my free time with them talking about our life. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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